More supportive feedback from my tutor following our discussion last week. Next steps are to do some more experiments with Assignment 6 before finishing it off, and completing the book version of Assignment 2, which still needs some work. Unfortunately my studio has been out of commission for a number of weeks so I have not been able to work on this particular project.
“Overall Comments
Another long and wide-ranging discussion covering not only Assignment 5 but also revisiting some earlier work and looking ahead to Assignment 6.
Feedback on assignment
This has worked well, successfully visualizing the underlying concept, and achieving what I set out wanting to achieve. The use of the Zone System to deal with the technical challenges presented by achieving proper exposure of the black and white images was good. It has given the final images a pleasantly old-fashioned feel, very much in the style of early landscape photographs. To an extent they are reminiscent of the work of Robert Adams and the American New Topographics school of landscape photography. (Adams did form part of my research for this assignment.)
Following on from this we had a lengthy discussion about the differences in the appearance of the composition of the railway station image in particular between the two versions, the result of having used two very different format cameras, notwithstanding that the camera positions were almost the same.
The lurid colours of the postcards are reminiscent of typical postcards from the 1960s and 1970s, and work well in the context of evoking a sense of nostalgia. You suggested I should take a look at and experiment with some of the preset filters in Photoshop / Lightroom that might produce similar effects. We also agreed that they are reminiscent of the early colour work of Guido Guidi, with early single emulsion films, that I have been looking at recently, although not necessarily a conscious influence on my work for this assignment.
If this assignment is to form part of the submission for assessment you recommended that I include more about the technical issues involved with the film work and the learning process that I went through.
Finally we discussed a the issue of engaging with people encountered during a shoot to explain what is happening and allay or defuse any concerns that they might otherwise have, something that I found particularly helpful while making this work, not least in the context of the difficult environment resulting from Covid 19.
Coursework
Demonstration of technical and Visual Skills, Demonstration of Creativity
You remain happy with the quality of what I am producing as part of the regular course work.
We revisited the experience of making books using Blurb, which I felt was very positive. I did not find the Blurb presets in Lightroom at all helpful or user friendly, particularly so far as incorporating text was concerned, but Blurb’s own app was simplicity itself.
So far as the artist’s statement was concerned, you are of the view that what I have put together supports all the work I have done, and continue to do, across all six assignments.
Research
Context, reflective thinking, critical thinking, analysis
Wide ranging for history and context, focused for exercises and assignment work – excellent throughout.
Learning Log
Overall this contains high quality work and reflects a level of commitment beyond the course itself to the medium and craft of photography.
Pointers for the next assignment / assessment
There is still work to do in gathering images for Assignment 6 (the full period of twelve months will not be complete until October) but it nevertheless appears that some form of slideshow is the way to present it. In this regard we revisited the slideshows with which I experimented for Assignments 1 and 2. The Buddhist bells and singing bowls soundtrack works well with the cloud sequence and adds a meditative nature to it. A soundtrack, perhaps reminiscent of Claudia Molitor’s Sonorama, would work well with the slideshow version of the journey in Assignment 2. Nevertheless we agreed that it would be too big a job and a distraction from the visual work. I should nevertheless experiment for Assignment 6 and see how it goes. I will in particular focus on an old Bobby Gentry song, “Seasons Come, Seasons Go” (not Vivaldi!) and see how it works. Because of potential copyright issues we agreed that if this does form the final soundtrack I should ensure that the slideshow that eventually appears on Vimeo should not be publicly accessible.”




































